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Review:marauderfan says:
I liked this chapter. I thought Bellatrix's obsession with needing to have Narcissa around and have her approval at all times was particularly good - it's like an early indicator of the obsessive sycophantic Death Eater she becomes when everything she does is for Voldemort.

One thing I did wonder however - maybe this was just my imagination but I always thought Bellatrix was the oldest of the Black sisters and Narcissa was the youngest, and that Sirius was several years behind her. (But I don't actually know.) Unless you made them the ages they are for a reason, in which case I'll zip the lip. Anyway, great chapter! This is looking really good so far :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing again! It means a lot to me.

Err, yes. You're very right. I do have an accurate version of the Black family tree, complete with most birth dates... but for this story's purposes I decided to make Bella the youngest. I'm trying to keep everything as close as possible to how it's supposed to be, but I figured I could afford a bit of a mess up on the ages. Hope you don't mind too terribly! ^^
Once again, thanks for reading and reviewing!
-MagykNargle


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