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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hi again :)

I really enjoyed this second installment of your story! Your take on Draco was both thought provoking as well as true to the Draco we see in the book. I loved his arrogance was still there, but you also got in his fear of being with the other death eaters. I also loved how you had him feeling like he was in Harry's shadow, something I don't think many people have explored.

One bit of CC I would offer is too maybe rethink how quickly Shacklebolt let Draco off the hook. Harry gives him one piece of evidence and all is forgiven. I would have thought there would have to be much more from Harry and Draco still might get something - sort of like community service if he was a muggle?

The ending was perfect, Draco actually manning up and saying thank you. It worked really well. Even if Harry was a little shocked.

I really can't tell you how much I'm enjoying reading your take on these characters. These little snippets are really well thought out so well done to you!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing this!

I really love Draco as a character, because I feel like he's got so much unexplored depth to his character.

I definitely see what you mean about how quickly he was let off the hook. I wrote this rather late at night, and now that I look back on it, that part does seem quite rushed. I will definitely fix that ASAP!

I'm glad you've enjoyed these little snippets! :) I will be reviewing your second chapter ASAP as well!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)


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