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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
It's really too bad Scorpius has a girlfriend at home :( he and Rose have bad some really sweet moments, and while that fact doesn't ruin them, it does sort of taint them, you know? Because they were intimate moments where they were telling each other their secrets and now we know he wasn't as honest and open as we thought he was. Also, I don't think there's any excuse for him cheating on his girlfriend. It would've been lame to break up with her in a letter, but he could have done it. Or just not kissed Rose.
I'm really hoping his letter is just about their relationship and Danielle, and not about his mom. I really want his mongo end up okay in the end. Either recovering or stable or something. Not dead. That may be a vain hope, as I'm sure you e ready decided what you want to do on that front, but I don't want her to die for several reasons. (One of them being that I'm simply not all that fond of reading about death. Since it's in like 90% of the books I've read. It's a major theme, and can be very interesting, but I don't really care for it.)
Despite the Danielle bit, Scorpius's journal was pretty sweet. I liked what was written about Rose in it. I'm so not very surprised that he keeps a journal, since he seems like a very sensitive guy.
I'm also a bit disappointed Rose didn't meet Mrs. Malfoy because I want to learn more about her character. Hopefully we'll see her later on?
And Ron is fast becoming my favorite character. He's just awesome. Update soon!

Author's Response: Though I agree with you that it's not fair that Scorpius wasn't honest and that he is clearly conflicted, I do have to note that no where did it actually say Danielle was his girlfriend. So keep that in mind :)

You'll find out in the next chapter (I believe) what the letter says.

I agree about death. It rounds a story well, but does shadow it.

You'll definitely see Mrs. Malfoy later on, so no worries.

Thank you!! Ron is my favorite HP character so I have a huge bias toward writing him :)

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