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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hello, Elphaba back again!

I love how normal and domestic Harry and Ron are in the opening section: "His dad was by the stove top, cooking bacon and talking to Uncle Ron about something from work..." :)

This made me chuckle as well: "...he did know one thing was for sure, and that was that his cousin was pretty uptight about a lot of minor things."

The mystery that has been introduced in this chapter really grabbed my attention, more than Molly and Noah's relationship trouble. I'm curious about what could be going on at Hogwarts, and like the debate that Albus overhears. I also REALLY wonder what Molly overheard. I agree that Ginny and Hermione would rather spy themselves than assign the kids to do it, I think that's realistic and true to their characters.

Hmm, I suspect that Albus and Molly will end up doing some spying on their own -- and maybe work on Molly's relationship woes in the process? ;)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for coming by and leaving a review! :D

I'm glad you liked my characters and some of the lines! I actually really enjoy writing older Harry and gang. They're really fun, and I seem to visualize them a bit bette.

Yay! The mystery has come through! I'm so SO glad that it was more than Molly and Noah's relationship as well! Don't get me wrong, it's a contributing factor, but I've actually got more questions and qualms about them than I ever thought about xD. What Albus and Molly hear unveils itself soon! :D

Molly certainly has relationship issues, that's for sure ;). And you'll have to wait and see about our dear Al! :D

Thank you so much for the review and read! :) I take it it's time to re-request again, yeah? :) Thanks again!


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