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Review:marauderfan says:
Didn't notice you had posted again until just now. Ok here goes:

Owen's comments to Luke and Avery weren't very nice. Owen is something I can't say in this review because it wouldn't be family friendly. :p If he likes Molly, he should at least be kind to her two best friends because they are so important to her!

I would have liked to see Molly and Owen interacting during the month they worked together because to be honest it was very surprising that she considered him a friend afterwards. It seemed very sudden. I would have liked to see a little of them becoming friends. She mentions herself as an "emotionless robot" but then talks about how much she's laughed in the past month. I don't know, it just seemed kind of odd to me.

Then Luke started being an idiot too. Ugh. He was seriously trying a love potion on her?! Molly has odd taste regarding the men in her life, haha

I wondered about Addie as well. If she could tell Will he has to go with her, why couldn't she have told James that instead?

Loved the last bit with Chloe, actually. I was hoping she'd accidentally get Luke and Avery's Amortentia and have it not work, but I guess she can smell the difference. (Also, I love the new book smell too. I laughed at Owen saying he liked the smell of daisies. I think daisies reek. Lol)

All in all I thought this was a good chapter! Lots of complicated romance drama for all parties, but I really like the dark angels plot and can't wait to see where that's going. Great work! (And sorry my review is extra rambly today)

Author's Response: Ooh Owen. What can I say about him really that would make anyone properly like him? I'm coming up with nothing ;). I can't say too much, but I do know that the month long absence in time is a bit much, but I really didn't want to write a lot with Owen because I don't want everyone growing really attached to him. It gives away a little information, but just so you know. ;) She was an emotionless robot before they started hanging out, and then, while he had her as a partner, he brought out the anger in her, and some of her laughter. That's what I meant with that.

Aw, Lukey-Pooh! xD Yeah, he's not exactly the smartest bloke, eh?

Addie didn't tell James to go with her because she knew he was considering Angel, and she didn't want to make it seem like she liked him, so she told Will he had to go with her so that way the purpose of the boys going at all would still stick.

I really like writing bits with Chloe in it! She's growing really attached to me lol.

Thank you so much for stopping by and reading/reviewing! It really means a lot to me that you're enjoying it! :)

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