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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag.

Wow, I am glad I chose to read this story. Remus is my favourite marauder and I love to read about him.

I always felt that he'd be affected greatly by James and Lily's deaths and by the war too, and I think you portrayed his pain beautifully. Him blaming himself for it in a way was also very realistic and something I'd imagine Remus to do. The part about him thinking that the people gathered didn't know the real James and Lily was very touching too, and something that a dear friend would think in such circumstances.

I absolutely loved the ending, you truly use your descriptions so well - "he cannot find the end of his tunnel" - it was just amazing. My heart broke for Remus, the poor guy. All in all, great story!

In fact, I loved it so much, I'd love to record it. I think it will make a great podcast and if you give me the permission I'd be happy to do the honours. Please let me know in your review response or in a PM if I have the 'go ahead' to podcast this, and then I will =) Or, if you think I wouldn't be suited to podcasting this, you can definitely volunteer the story on HPPC, I won't mind. But really, such a dark and beautiful piece needs to be podcasted!

Great job!
10/10
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey Aditi!

Wow, I rarely hear people say Remus is their favourite Marauder, he's my joint favourite with Sirius!

I'm so glad that you thought I portrayed his pain, as I've never had someone so close to me die, so it was mainly guessing about what he may feel. I'm glad that you liked that part, as I wasn't to sure if I was making him too bitter for a funeral.

I think that's the tragedy of Remus as he never really got to the tunnel as he carried on living in this life which never really improved until the end when Teddy's born but he dies :'(

Yeah sure go ahead, I love all of your podcasts so of course I don't mind! I'll look forward to listening to it :D

Thanks for the great review and happy podcasting!

-Kiana


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