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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi, here for some review tag! :)

I liked this little sorting ceremony story a lot. I have a weakness for our favourite characters being turned into innocent little eleven year olds anxious for the future, and this was a really nice bit of insight into Cissy's mind. I liked the little details that hinted about her personality, like the fact that she was determined to appear a certain way though she was inwardly nervous.

I also thought it was funny how she didn't want to be in Ravenclaw because her sisters and cousins would tease her, it was very typical of a child and very sweet! I enjoyed the detail about Andromeda comforting Narcissa when Bellatrix is being a little rude, it fits so well with her character.

My favourite bit of foreshadowing here was probably the hat telling Narcissa that she was destined to do something great. She thinks that she's going to do something brave that makes her powerful, but in fact it will be her un-Slytherin traits, like her love and loyalty to her family, which will make her save Harry's life that night in the forest. So I thought that was a very nice detail. :)

I never thought much about Cissy as a child, but you really brought her to life and gave her depth here. Good job! :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you liked this sorting ceremony story. I love turning characters into eleven year olds too, and Narcissa is one of my favourite characters, so I am glad you liked what I did, and the little details as well.

Yeah I figured that an eleven-year-old would think of such things, glad you found it funny! Though I didn't show much of Andromeda and Bellatrix, I still wanted to hint at their personalities from Narcissa's point of view, so I am pleased you like that.

Indeed, it was my favourite bit to write too. The sorting hat can be very wise at times xD You exactly voiced my thoughts while writing that scene. I am glad you found it a nice detail.

I brought her to life and gave her depth? Really? Thanks a ton!

Your words mean a lot to me, thank you!


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