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Review:ohmymerlin says:
/cries because the relationship between James and Lily is so sweet; they're the best brother/sister pairing in the whole wide world.

James is so sweet! I just love him so much! He's so nice to Maddie and Lily and she was so adorable when she called out her own name! ieufhkjcgdf

And Maddie with the snorkels, omg. I couldn't stop laughing at that. I could totally picture it and it made me want to go snorkelling. :p

I just keep reading her and James dancing together and it makes me so happy that I just want to cry. :'D

But oh mY GOD. JOSHUA WADCOCK HAS DRAGON POX. DOES THIS MEAN JAMES MAY GET BACK ON THE TEAM?! I REALLY HOPE SO, HE'S BEEN A GOOD BOY!

[SCREAMING]

So yeah, I just loved this chapter. I love the way you write James, it's just so perfect and I want one.

Where do I order him? Ebay? :p

Anywho, loved this chapter, as always, and I can't wait to read the next one! :)

Author's Response: I absolutely adore writing James and Lily's moments. If I'd had a big brother, James would be the one I'd want. :) And yes, Maddie was utterly ridiculous as usual in this chapter, the snorkel moments made me laugh when I came up with them.

Wadcock does indeed have dragon pox! The saga will unfold in the next few chapters, and your question should be answered satisfactorily. The next one is in the queue. :) Thanks for reviewing!


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