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Hello! Here with your first prize review! :D

I was going through your Author's Page, trying to decide what to review and the story summary made me curious. =] Besides your banner is VERY pretty. I loved it! ;)

Nala? Is it taken from The Lion King? Well, I haven't heard it anywhere else and I love ALL the names in the movies... Nala, Kiara, Simba even Scar. They're so clever aren't they? This story had variety of names too and they fitted well here and there. But I didn't understand your intention behind the different nicknames... why Kit and Mili? Childhood pronounciations of their original names maybe?

I thought the flow was a bit slow and you described too much. I'm the kind of person who likes "short but sweet" things and my chapters are always short. So maybe that's why I thought this was too long. And I know that I'm the only person on the site who hates descriptions so don't mind. It's just an opinion. :) But still you could cut off some unnecessary detail.

Otherwise this was an enjoyable chapter. The grammar and spelling was good. =]

Ashwini

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