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Review:Lululuna says:
Lu lu lu lu luna back here for your requested review! :D Is it strange that I picked my username based on a North American clothing company that I was wearing when making my account? Maybe just a bit! :P

I liked this chapter. A lot. Your writing style is very detailed and rich, and despite the large cast of characters introduced I feel like I'm connecting very well with them. I really liked the characterization of all the first years, since usually they're just kind of portrayed as a bunch of silly, frightened kids. You really bring them to life and give Lily, Hugo and the rest firm personalities. I really like Lily especially: she has a lot of sass and I liked her conversation with the Sorting hat and her defense of Albus being a Slytherin.

I was a little confused since I thought Lily and Hugo didn't know the truth about the Sorting, but maybe I just mis-understood in the last chapter. I enjoyed the conflict with the first year girls, though they were a little confusing to keep track of. Is the girl with the chopped up hair Hayden, who was sorted into Ravenclaw? If so maybe make that a bit clearer! :)

This was another great chapter, and I think you really captured the essence of the Sorting and made it very interesting and all your own. Great job! I'm really getting into this story! :D

Author's Response: Yes, Hayden is the one who went into Ravenclaw. :) I've had a bit of confusion on that, so perhaps I shall go back and correct it. :)

Yay! I'm glad you'er getting into it! :D It makes me really happy! I really do enjoy writing for this story, and with readers who enjoy it, it makes it all the better! :) Thank you for continuously answering to my request, they really do help, and I thoroughly enjoy receiving and reading them! I just want to give you a big big thank you for coming by and reviewing! :D I'm so glad you like it and are getting into it!


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