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Review:Erised says:
Hi Jami! :)

This is a great start to what I'm sure is going to be a really cute little fic! I liked hoe you set up the background for Oliver's life and mentioning the war and how time has gone by was a nice touch. I also enjoyed how you stayed so in touch with his character - his 29 year old self hasn't changed a bit! The role of manager definitely suits him, so nice work there. It's definitely what I imagined him doing post-books.

Oh my goodness, Aidan was SO CUTE! I can find myself getting a little annoyed sometimes at children in fics because they come across as overly insightful and too grown up, but Aidan was perfect. He was sweet and charming and acted his age, and his excitement was wonderful to see. I had a big grin on my face when Oliver gave him and Mia the tickets!

And speaking of Mia, well. She's a character isn't she? Mysterious and closed off is definitely interesting, and I liked how she wasn't fawning all over Oliver and he was clearly more enamoured. I can't wait to see more of her story and character development unfold!

Great start here my lovely, I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Hi Jenny!! I don't even know what compelled me to start this...but I did so I suppose there's no going back now :P. Actually this story is one I've kind of been toying with but couldn't figure out who to use. And then today it clicked. OLIVER!

I'm really happy you thought I kept him the same as book Oliver. I need to reread the parts he's in or something, because I don't remember nearly enough of him.

I'm so happy you liked Aidan! I work with children, so even though I'm definitely out of my comfort zone when it come to writing Oliver, kids I can handle. Ha! I'm really happy he seemed realistic to you. I wanted a blend of slightly irritating but mostly charming going on ;).

I'm really excited that you liked this first chapter. I plan on doing a mixture of Oliver and Mia's perspective, so hopefully you'll like hers!

Thank you so much for stopping by, it put a huge smile on my face ♥

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