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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey there!

Wow Lila really is tortured. There are so many complexities about her Iíve got to be careful not to analyse every single one and the meaning behind them otherwise it will turn into an English essay. I really like all her hints about her mother and the one about how sheís changed since Greyback bit her as itís interesting to see sheís so affected by it as I never thought that much about the bite. I really canít wait to meet her.

Then the thing with her and Roxanne, which is again really interesting. I almost thought that Lila hated her from the way she seemed to be annoyed by her and didnít want to help her through her depression then when she mentioned the kiss between them it just confused me even more. I think thatís why I like it because of all the complexities and it really does make it a fascinating thing to read.

One thing I really did like was the way you showed us that Lila and Roxanne are suffering and didnít directly say, it added so much to the story. Admittedly I donít have much experience with depression myself, but I know people who have and it all seems to be really accurate from what they told me. Iím intrigued about the comment about Roxanne and the lake as it would be interesting to know the reason behind it.

Iím still not entirely sure of Albus. Obviously weíre seeing him through Lilaís eyes so itís going to be negative version of him, but he does seem to be a nice person. I think it was the way he stuck up for Lily after what Lila did to her and the way he offered to take her to the Hospital Wing, then again, he may have just done that to annoy her. These people are so complex I suppose Iíll never really know!

Anyhow those were another great two chapters and I canít wait to read on :D

-Kiana

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