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Review:Calypso says:
Hey there, Sian! I'm back for the last chapter!

It was really nice to have this chapter after their wedding- to get a bit of a look at their married life, and find out about all the fallout from their elopement! I love the way you write Molly and Campbell together. The way they talk to each other feels so sweet, and so natural, and I like that they still tease each other all the time!

The description of the dragon training centre was gorgeous- I wish I could go and work there now! I really liked the sense of community between all the workers, and it's nice for Molly to have some new friends, even if they're all mad enough to want to be dragon handlers :P

And her family's reactions were great! Poor Percy! I especially liked Lucy's letter- it was a really nice touch to have them come together over this, and I liked the idea that they might get on better in the future as a result.

However, I think my favourite thing about this chapter (and through most of the story) is how you stayed true to Molly's character. Even with all the things that have happened to her, she still seems like the Molly we met at the beginning of the story- with her always being early and hating PDAs- and yet you still manage to move her on, into a much happier, more confident person. Those last few paragraphs with her looking back over how the relationship had changed her made me smile so much! It was so sweet, and touching, and just perfect :)

I've enjoyed reading this story so much- it's been so happy and nice to read after a long, exam-ridden day! You write beautifully and I just love your characters (especially Molly!) A really fantastic story!


Author's Response: Hi Bethany! I'm so happy you found time to finish reading this story, and I hope your exams are going well!

To me this time seemed the natural ending to the story, so that readers could find out what happened to Molly and Campbell after the wedding. They're still kind of in the honeymoon period here, so to speak, and they're still very much in love - but the teasing is one of those things that will continue for as long as they're together.

It was so fun for everything to change around in Molly's life, but I really wanted her character to stay recognisable throughout. People can grow and change, but it's not realistic to suggest that they change completely, so it was important to me for Molly to stay true to her essential character.

It's so good to know that this story made you smile and I hope it cheered you up. Thank you for so many lovely reviews!

Sian :)

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