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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! I'm really glad you suggested this because I really loved it! You write humour really well: there's a sort of irony in the dry, factual tone of the narrative which mixed with the ridiculous actions and words of the characters is just so perfect and elegantly ridiculous.

The idea of Cho and Lavender lamenting the loss of Harry and Ron is really funny and clever! I'm glad they've at least managed to find each other to get through these hard times, or to egg each other on, however you want to see it! :P

Rita Skeeter is so funny, I've wondered before if she really has a personality behind all the evil exploitation and sass. Her ruthlessness in getting the girls to spill their juicy secrets was so funny and in character, and I liked how she felt a slight tinge of guilt and then cast it away. You wrote her really well! :) I loved the little details like her writing in crimson ink, and her eyes lighting with excitement at a particular piece of gossip.

My favourite parts would have to be... well, I loved every word, but I'll point out a few. Lavender's comments about Hermione being pregnant were pure gold. The line about Cho "mutilating a picture of Ginny and muttering darkly" gave me such an amusing mental image as well. And the bit about Lavender going after Krum... too, too good. Oh, and the fact that Lav-lav has a moderately succesful modelling career, that's just too perfect for her.

Anyway, amazing job with this, I can really tell you had fun with it. I'm going to favourite it and eagerly await the next story! Thanks for the swap! :D

Author's Response: Haha, I'm really glad that you loved it! I'm always surprised that I can write humour as no one ever gets my jokes in real life, yet people get them in writing. Perhaps it's because I have more time to put into them... Wow elegantly ridiculous I've never heard those two words been put together before but I like the sound of it!

Yeah I'm not sure if Cho and Lavender being together is a good thing, as it seems to make it worse but it's fun to write so I'm not complaining :P

I'm so glad that you liked Rita, as she was so much fun to write! I'm glad that you liked the feeling of guilt as I do believe she does heart - deep down, mind! The little pieces were really fun to include, so it's great other people like them too.

Turning those characters into slightly evil and demented ones is really fun, you should try it as making them do ridiculous things is great, and you never know it could happen!

Thanks for this great review and I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter and favouriting it :D

-Kiana


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