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Review:hopelessDREAMS says:

I was so surprised when you replied to my thread, but happy too! I've missed your writing and you have not failed me yet. The emotion, the intensity, drama, all of it is just... amazing.

I love how you captured every moment until the very end, without a single piece of dialogue. That's not easy to do, and you perfected it. I honestly don't know what else I can say and that's a good thing.

I would LOVE to read more of your writing, so don't hesitate to request again. ♥

Author's Response: It was excellent to see you back again on HPFF! I couldn't resist nabbing a spot in your review queue. :D Thanks very much for offering and for reviewing this story!

I'm really glad that you enjoyed this story, and that the emotional intensity came through. One can't be sure that it will, even in a longer work, but it's even more worrying for a short one like this - with so few words, can one still evoke the desired level of feeling from readers?

It's funny, I never even noticed the lack of dialogue until you mentioned it. XD This is what comes of being someone who doesn't talk much. The story is rooted too deeply in Albus's consciousness - and the lack of dialogue also emphasizes how alone he is now, abandoned and alienated from the rest of the world. He gains his later wisdom from this, I think, from having only himself for company, and being able to see the world from the outside.

I don't want to ramble on any further - my responses for this story are much longer than the reviews they're for (not to mention than the story itself). Thank you again! :D

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