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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Hey there dear! As I'm sure you know (or are about to find out), I've just listened to and reviewed the podcast of this chapter on HPPC, so I figured I might as well come and review it on here, too! (After all, there really are too few random reviews going around these days!)

As I said on HPPC, I know this is actually a prologue, but it seems to me to be a letter from Bellatrix to herself... and it is haunting and terrifying and chilling and just... wow. It really feels as though Bellatrix is speaking here, and, although I feel as though it gives me much more insight into her character, it also makes me view her as a bit MORE insane than I did before. (But I promise, that's a GOOD thing! :P)

You've really just got her down to an art here (at least, in my humble opinion). It flows perfectly and there aren't any errors... it's really just an amazing piece, dear! 10/10!

Author's Response: Hi MirsJaydeMalfoy! I actually saw this before I saw your podcast review and scrambled over there as fast as I could. And ahh thank you so much for both absolutely amazing reviews ♥

I never thought about this being a letter, but that's such a cool idea! I think that's one of my favorite things about second person narrative, is it can be a lot of different things.

And I'm really happy this made you view her as a bit more insane. mwahaha. This is sort of my ending to the story, I guess. Then after this I back track to show just how she ended up as the crazy person in the prologue. Poor Bella, scary thing. haha!

Aww that's such a huge compliment. I'm so happy you think I did a decent job with her, and thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and review both here and HPPC! ♥

Jami


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