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Review:slayground says:
Hahahahahahaha omg, I loved this.

I literally cracked up reading it - I don't have too much hate for either Lavender or Cho, but I love how you portrayed them here. It was actually super funny, unlike some fics where their stupidity and their self-centered attitudes are less funny and more just really, really annoying.

I've said this many times before, but writing humor...I suck at it. I'm completely, one hundred percent terrible. And I don't know why, because I like to think I can be pretty funny sometimes! But yes, I've basically come to accept the fact that I'll never be able to write a properly funny story, and I can't help but admire people who can. So kudos to you there, I'm officially jealous!

I loved your characterization here as well, specifically of Rita. I think she's a hard character to peg sometimes, because she's not as one-dimensional to me as I think some people write her as. But you did a wonderful job of adding depth to her character in such a short fic, so again, wonderfully done there.

I don't really have much else to say, other than the fact that I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Keep up the wonderful work love!

Molly xx

Author's Response: Hi Molly!

I don't hate Lavender or Cho either, in fact, I feel sorry for them having these stereotypes, but it was so much fun to write I don't feel too bad! And you didn't find them annoying, that's amazing but also really great :D

I'm so glad that I made you laugh, as that's always the biggest thing I worry about when writing a humour fic, as I'm not sure if people will find my humour funny :P Humour isn't that hard to write, so you could probably do it, you just have to think of stupid situations then write them down!

I'm glad that you liked Rita's characterisation, as I agree, she's a pretty complex one so I wasn't too sure about it myself, but yay you liked her :D

Sorry the response was kind of me blabbering away but I'm really glad that you enjoyed it :D Thanks for the great review!

-Kiana


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