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-BookDinosaur- here with your requested review!

I really liked this little story-I feel like you really managed to get inside Firenze's mind and it felt like he was really telling us the story. Not only did you capture his voice, but you captured his centaur-ness as well, with the frequent references to the sky. I've never read anything from a centaur's POV, but you pulled it off brilliantly.

I feel like the emotions of the centaurs were very realistic-they wouldn't be coming out of a war with level heads and minds, and if it were me, I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be able to think objectively either, so I think the whole 'rising up against the wizards' thing made sense.

And ahhh! The ending. WHY?! Well, since I want everything to turn out perfectly for Firenze, I am going to believe that he ran away very fast with the foal. (*lalala, I'm not listening to anyone who says otherwise lalala*)

Although if I put my emotions away, the ending does make sense :(. And I suppose it would have been unrealistic if Bane changed his mind. Boohoo.

Anyway, a brilliant chapter that I thoroughly enjoyed reading.

Author's Response: Hi! Good to see you back at this story!

I'm glad you liked it and that Firenze's character felt authentic. I really enjoyed writing him and imagining his thoughts, so hearing that he came across well is just wonderful to hear. I never thought I'd write anything from a centaur POV, but it came surprisingly smoothly! :)

I'm glad you thought the rebellion against the wizards made sense in the post-battle context. I wanted to show that not was all quite well, and that Voldy's fall would lead to more conflict in the wizarding world.

Haha oh no! You can maintain your own ending if you like! :) But I'm glad you thought it did fit well, emotions aside.

Thank you so much for this lovely review! :D

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