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Review:Gaiapet says:
Yo homes...

It must have killed you not to write the Quidditch scene.

Buy some tickets to the gun show.
- Waking up from unconsciousness Freddie is silly.

I couldn’t take my eyes off her. I knew she didn’t want to be there. She probably wanted to be upstairs studying with Scorpius Malfoy, but she was here. In the hospital. I had no idea what happened, but suddenly I was reminded of when I skinned my knee when I was nine and Rox wouldn’t leave my room until it was properly bandaged and I had ice to stop the swelling. She brought me her teddy bear to make me feel better.
- Their relationship makes me so sad. I need to know what happened and that they can move past it.

“I can survive. James has unconsciously volunteered to bring me sweets.”
“I’m so considerate,” he muttered.
- Frames!

I'm so stressed by Annie and Ryan. Their relationship with Freddie is so different! Annie and Freddie are built on friendship and mutual respect and cuteness. Ryan and Freddie are 100% heat and chemistry. And both of those are good things! Why can't we just combine them into one person and make this a fun rom-com instead? Ayan? Or Rannie? Or Margaret? Anywho, Ryan has the chance to grow into mutual respect and understanding plus heat. Which is good. But Annie is also great and grounds him. I'M SO CONFLICTED!

I dog-eared the book (causing her to twitch)
- Yes. I too have that compulsion.

I see your Doctor Who reference you sneaky little goose!

Well I guess there goes my conflicted feelings. Except I still think those two crazy kids could make it work! AGH!

Things getting real again on the baby front. Glad she is letting him in more and that he is trying more. Even if they don't end up together or anything, it would be nice for the kid for the two of them to be friends at least.

SERIOUS REALIZATION?!?!?!?!?!
I know what that means.THE BRAND FRIGIDAIRE COMES FROM FRIGID AND AIR BEING COMBINED, MEANING THAT A FRIGIDAIRE IS ACTUALLY COLD AIR WHICH IS WHAT A FRIGIDAIRE DOES, AND THIS WAS ALL DONE ON PURPOSE BY THE MAKERS OF FRIGIDAIRE!...is what he will realize...yeah...

Author's Response: LOOK IT'S YOU!

Omg you have no idea how hard it was for me to not write that Quidditch scene. You know how much I love my Quidditch. But this story isn't about Quidditch... Freddo just happens to play.

I love the little extra pieces between Rox and Freddie. There is something tragic there.

FRAMES.

I like that you're conflicted. I also like the idea of Ayan. I enjoy writing characters and conflicts where there is realistically no black and white. it's all gray area. Both girls could technically work for Freddie. It's which girl is right for him that is the question.

DOCTOR WHO. Glad you saw it :)

How did you know that was Freddie's realization? YOU ARE A MIND READER.

Thanks :)


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