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Review:STG Sagmag says:
Hey, STG Sagmag here with your review :D

Oh my. I would hate to have to work with Dawlish :P
Anyway, this chapter was pretty good - even, well-balanced, all that. No spelling or grammatical errors as far as I can see.

I laughed at how excited Bill was when he told Tonks about getting a real date with Fleur. I like how you're expanding on the early days of their relationship, and I loved how Fleur was the one who asked Bill out and not vice versa.

Tonks's voice is hilarious as usual and my favorite line in this chapter has got to be:

ďAlright there Remus, lovely weather isnít it?Ē I asked politely. My mum always told me if I didnít know what to say, talk about the weather, as British people always have a comment available about it."

I WILL keep that in mind next time I meet someone British. However, if Tonks isn't British, then what is she?

A good, good chapter. Hoping to see more of a plot line soon :)

xSara

Author's Response: Hey Sara and thanks for getting here so quickly!

I'm glad that you couldn't find any typos or grammar errors as that's always something to be happy about!

I have a soft spot for Bill and Fleur and I love them too much I couldn't write a novel on them in fearing of ruining them, so I liked including little snippets throughout the chapter!

I'm glad that you find Tonks' voice funny, as I wasn't sure if it was only me cracking up at her lines :P Yeah you can always talk about weather with them!

Yeah I realise that there isn't that much plot in the earlier chapters, but plot lines should develop later on! Thanks for pointing that out to me and I'll make sure to include more from now on! Thanks for another great review!

-Kiana


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