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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! I'm back for your next requested review, and sorry about the delay! :)

This is another great chapter, and you captured a really interesting side of Malfoy. I like how you've gone into his fate after the war, and how he actually was at risk of being put into Azkaban. It's refreshing that the wizarding world would be willing to give young people like Malfoy a second chance, despite the mistakes they made. I also really liked how Harry stood up for him, despite their differences, and I definitely think it's something Harry would do.

I liked the line about Malfoy not wanting to be grouped in with the other DE. He always thought he was unique and deserved special treatment, but for once he doesn't want to be part of his father's group and be recognized for fear: he just wants to be free and normal. It suggests that maybe he had doubts before, and sees himself as seperate from that old DE identity.

I liked how Draco felt a little humiliated that Harry had saved his life: it was very in character. I don't think that the war would have changed him entirely, and that he'd for the most part continue being a rather rotten person, but I like the contrasts in his personality and his character growth that we see here. :) I kind of suspect that he won't be too polite and kind in the future, but it was a nice thought of Draco to have! :P

I really like the style of these stories so far, how they focus around one moment and retreat to flashbacks and context. It flows really smoothly, and tells the reader why the characters are the way they are in that particular moment. Your writing is very clear, but packs a lot of emotion through the simple structure. I love it! :)

Feel free to re-request!! :)

Author's Response: Haha, that's fine! Sorry about the delay responding to this too! :P

Draco was a fun character to explore - and I think rescuing him was a very Harry-esque move. :)

The ending there is kind of one of those things where you make this promise to be better, although it may not work out as perfectly as you intended. I can't imagine Draco becoming this great guy, but he could definitely aspire for that.

I'm glad you like the style - it was really fun to write this way.

Thanks so much for reviewing, and I will definitely re-request! :)

-ShadowRose (Taylor)


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