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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hi Taylor!

Wow! This really blew me away. I wasn't sure what to expect when I read the summary and it certainly wasn't this! I didn't think anyone would make me actually feel sorry for Fenrir Greyback but you actually did here.

I've never read anyone give Greyback a background before and I like how you kind of both compared and contrasted it to Lupin growing up and how they dealt wih it. They both struggled to start with but Lupin's parents didn't shun him and Dumbledore accepted him into school where he made friends who didn't care that he was a werewolf. Greyback got none of those things which is the justification in his mind for doing what he did.

You wrote the part with the dementor amazingly well. You got the chilling nature and atmosphere just right. I almost wanted him to escape by the end! What have you done to me! I was quite happy disliking him as a character until I read this haha!!

Seriously though, this was amazing as a first chapter, I was hooked from the start. You really took me on a rollercoster of emotions and I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hi Lauren! I'm glad I made you feel sympathy for Fenrir, as that was sort of my goal here. :)

I really enjoyed drawing the comparisons between Fenrir and Remus, because it just shows how much a person's treatment can affect how they turn out.

I'm glad you liked this - thanks for reviewing! :)

-ShadowRose (Taylor)


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