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Review:potterfan310 says:
I think it's quite sweet that Al has gone out of his way to track down Phina and sort of kidnap her just to tell her they need to talk.

"it isn't as if he's the one carrying a child that he's going to be pushing out of his . . . manly bits." - I love this, gotta love Phina :)

I love Lysander, he's definitely his mother's son. What's not to love.

I LOVE that Lily finds out, I mean slightly awkward because your baby's auntie finds out before their father but still I think it's great.

"It's like a ripping off a band-aid. Except, this time, the pain lasts for nine months instead of a few seconds." - This is another of my favourite lines, I mean it's true but funny at the same time. Although you might want to change Band-Aid to plaster as that's what they're called in the UK.

I love Phina and I love Lily, I can't wait for her reaction in thee next chapter!

Soph x :)

Author's Response: I love writing Seraphina, out of all of the stories that I'm writing so far, she's my favourite one to write because she's just so darn sarcastic and cynical.

The Scamander twins are mentioned very little in fanfiction and instead of creating new characters, I just figured that I might as well use the ones that are already there.

I never actually planned for Lily to find out before Albus but it ended up just happening that way in the end. I have to say, I enjoyed writing that scene.

Thank you for pointing out the band-aid thing! I often miss things like that and I always hope that someone will come across anything like that and point it out to me so that I can fix it. Sometimes, I just don't notice things. I'll get to fixing that as soon as possible if I don't forget.

Thanks for reviewing (again), I really appreciate it!

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