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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello, I'm here with your review for the exchange!

I liked that you placed this story in a non-identified Era. You captured the rigidity and interest to proper education very well.

One comment I would make is that the parents were a little quick in accepting the fact that their daughters are magical. This is a time where people were reluctant to accept electricity in their houses because it was something new and unknown and thus they did not need it. And once they accepted the fact that the girls were witches, they would just go ahead and send them off? I would've liked to see a little more reluctance on their part.

The grammar and vocabulary were very good and this was a very enjoyable first chapter! Good job!

Ral

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

This story was inspired by this year's April Fool's Day Theme. I started writing the story to be compliant with the new no romance rule. After finding out what day it was, I decided to continue the story.

I have added a note about adding a little more reluctance to accepting the children are witches as well as sending them off to school into my timeline.

Thank you very much!


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