Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Bobby Dazzler says:
Hey Claire, how're you going today? :)

So, either I haven't had quite enough coffee today (up all night with a toddler with the flu, eurgh!) that my brain is misfiring or I missed something in the timeline of this story and that of DH and they're not quite matching up in my brain. It starts off at the manor when Bellatrix is torturing Hermione, but towards the end it mentions the Room of Requirement where Crabbe tried to kill Harry? Granted, it's been a few years since I read the book (and only the once... SHAME!), but even in movie timeline which is still pretty accurate, I thought that occurred after the Manor scene. So... my question is, how much coffee do I need for it to make sense in my brain today? lol. Nah, my question is did Draco just keep a running inner monologue going as the canon story progressed, or am I just missing the entire plot this time around? If it's the latter, I'm so so sorry and I will go chain myself to the coffee pot!

I thought writing wise it was beautiful, no spelling or grammar mistakes that I could see and it made for flawless easy reading (minus the Kate-confusion), and the imagery of what you were saying was quite clear and packed a punch. I could really see the silver crest of Malfoy in my mind for some reason, it definitely stuck in my mind.

I am unfamiliar with the song! I'll have to get on youtube and have a look I think, might make things fall into place for me a little better, but aside from my general fuzzy-brained insanity, I thought it was a nice story and a good insight into the very troubled mind of Malfoy :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review!
And sorry for the confusion, but it's more of a running monologue rather than specifically where he is. Sorry about the confusion! And I definitely know that I need coffee with a long day!

The song is one of my favorites! It's from LOTR Soundtrack and I thought it fit perfectly. So much light and dark all based on one war. Thank you so much for the lovely review! (:


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 205
Submit Report: