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Review:Luke says:
I really liked the story, it's definitely not the sort of thing I'd usually read and I found it very pleasant.

When I read the first chapter and worked out which partnership the book would be based on, I do admit to making a whooping noise and being generally very excited.

I like the reality you've given all the characters, Lily's almost fear of relationships which could have been expanded on slightly as well as the journey she takes as a character parallel and intertwined to her relationship with Matt in becoming an investigator.

You really do show a wonderful character arc in this story in which the characters do change and grow as the relationship progresses and it was wonderful to read about.

... I do get the feeling that your AP series may go beyond 7 books... as with him always at work and doing stuff, dark and interesting stuff must be going on as well as his relationship with the fiancee which also proves interesting... maybe there will be a time jump?

Overall a solid piece of work that had me very interested and looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, especially since it's not what you usually read.

Aw, very happy you liked the ship! They just fit together so well. I probably could've expanded Lily's fear of relationships, but this was meant to be a shorter story, so I didn't go as deep as I could've if I wanted to make it really long.

More than seven? Ahh! Yes, Albus's work is very interesting and would make for a good novel, but I'll have to see how I feel after I finish the next three. I might want to try something else. Who knows. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)


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