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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Hi, it's -BookDinosaur- here again. :)

I really enjoyed this chapter. First off, I liked the way you portrayed Harry's death-it wasn't overly dramatic or terribly tragic. It was simple, and that made it all the more effective.

I felt that Hermione's reaction was believable, crying and suchlike, but Ron' reaction was rather tame-the only sign of his sadness was his voice cracking. Maybe you could just add a sentence, about how he felt devastated, or that he sniffed hard and tried to stop the tears because he was trying to stay strong for Hermione, who was crying on his shoulder. Something small like that would be effective, but it's just a suggestion. ;)

Also, one small error I spotted: You wrote "He doubted his thoughts towards Dung would never be too charitable." I think that's meant to be 'would ever be too charitable.'

I hope you don't feel I'm being too harsh, I really do enjoy reading this story.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

It was hard writing his death. Yes, he knows he can do magic in this situation, but he's also not terribly sure that he should. Add in knowing that nothing he does will help his relatives...

I've added a little more for Ron's reaction to Harry's death and for his disbelief at it. I've also corrected the sentence to include "ever" instead of "never".

I do appreciate the corrections. Thank you for taking the time to read through each chapter.

Thank you very much!


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