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Review:alicia and anne says:
Oh Kieron! That is such a lame excuse to not go and see his sister! :D

OH MY! Poor Theo, he knows and see's too much of his children's lifes, I feel so sorry for him :D

I wonder if Kieron will be nice at his party? I think it might be hard for him to be nice to certain people!

Aww Annie's kids seem really nice, and it's good that they met Theo first, he is the most awesome one! :D

I love the Lexi is moaning at her dad for wearing the wrong outfit and he doesn't seem to really mind at all about what he's wearing :D

Awww she's having a baby shower! :D That's so cute!! I love it!

Kieron made a present!! He is definitely the best brother ever! I love knowing that he can make things like that! That is such an amazing present!

Aww Theo is dancing :D He's so cute!!

What? Why is Hugo ignoring Emmett? :-( Oh Hugo those letters don't mean anything!! :-( I'm glad that Lexi could cheer him up with making him talk to Erik :D

Oh Hugo :D I still can't stop laughing at imagining Ron's face whenever it's raining men is played or sung :D

That is progress with Kieron and Daphne, I was expecting him to yell at her. Aww the picture made me feel so sad, knowing that Daphne was Kieron's whole world once and now they're so far apart it's almost unfixable :-(

Oh Hugo and Emmett! I just want to hug them so much! *big squishy hugs* Hugo you are a good person!

"You look like you're in a good mood, Kieron?"

"Have I punched you in the face today?"

I must say that those are my two favourite lines of the story! :D

OH my god! How could you have an ending like that!!!
AHHH I can't wait for more! She's having the baby early! I hope the baby is going to be okay!
Brilliant chapter!!! Loved it.

Author's Response: Hehe, maybe, but his excuse probably got him in less trouble than "You're fine, aren't you?" :P

Oh, Theo. He knows way too much. One day, they'll make his head go bang.

Kieron can be nice... well, he can walk away. ;)

He so is! I'm glad you like them.

Theo has lived through a war; as long as everything is clean and he has access to a shower, he really doesn't care.

Darcy says baby shower, Lexi hears presents. What's not to love? :P

He's very good, Kieron. He's used to being on his own, with just books and games. He just can't explain how he does it.

Theo dancing is like ice cream. Yummy. ;)

Hugo will see that soon. :)

He is also mean, but so funny.

Progress! Everyone loves progress! I doubt they'll be like in the picture again, but at least they're trying.

*big squishy hugs for Hugo/Emmett*

Favorite two lines ever! :P

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