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Review:marauder5 says:
I really enjoyed this! I think it was funny how everyone scared the parents-to-be with their horror stories of parenthood! However, one think that doesn't quite make sense to me is that Harry felt he didn't know anything about babies, when he has taken care of Teddy and when they have a whole bunch of nieces and nephews. I get that it's very different when you have kids of your own, a MUCH bigger responsibility etc., but he should be familiar with 'spit-up', shouldn't he? Well, it was still funny.

Also, I wanted to comment on Percy. In my mind, he changes a lot after the war, but I think this would have been even better if he had kept some of his old traits. I like how you made him act like he knew everything about being a father, when he really didn't, but I think you could have stretched it even further. For example, maybe Bill should have been the one to talk about sex life after the baby is born, and then you could have Percy blush and be very awkward about it? I don't know, these are just suggestions. It is your story, after all ;)

I do, however, love your writing style! I can tell that you put an effort into each chapter to make it as good as possible, and you're successful! This is one of the better stories I've read about Harry and Ginny becoming parents! It really makes sense that Harry would worry about being a good father, since he doesn't really have a role model. Also, I think that the interaction between Harry and Ginny is brilliantly written. And of course Mrs Weasley would be upset that they didn't run straight to her as soon as they found out...

Well, you should be very content with the story so far, and I look forward to reading the rest of it! Please post the next one as soon as possible :)

Author's Response: I love Percy's character. He's very complex. I really wanted to show how he still has to be the 'expert' on everything. When Bill decided to get real, he had to show that he knew ALL about that. And after you're that age and married, you really don't get awkward or blush much. Especially with your brothers.
I'm so glad you are enjoying the story! Thank you so much for reviewing!~GW


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