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Review:rez says:
omg. that scene, that scene with timothy, that was so sad! it was so utterly heartbreaking, I was practically in tears by the point where Bethy breaks down in the elevator. yargh, that was exactly the sort of thing I'd been waiting for, for god knows how many chapters!! even though nothing actually happened!! THANK YOU!

and omg this. "It felt as though the entirety of her small world had been waiting on tenterhooks for the next big moment to happen, and as it hadnít yet, the strings inside each person were wound tighter and tighter with each passing day."
It's like you were channelling my previous comments LOL except obviously you haven't been writing this as you update but still, that's funny. maybe you did anticipate how frustratingly slow this would be not just for Bethy but for your poor readers.. and now holidays of all things.. I believe you owe us some quicker updates perhaps? (not that I can tell you what you owe us but yknow. a girl can dream)

have a good time, always awaiting the next

Author's Response: That scene was a bit heartbreaking, you're quite right -- I'm getting small twists in my stomach, actually, thinking about it now! (Is that all right for an author to feel?) Poor Beth and all her wibbly emotions, though. :( She is a girl on the verge of a breakdown, let me tell you. All this stress is really getting to her.

True story -- when a story is moving perhaps slower than maybe I'd like, or I suspect my readers are like, I feel the same frustrations as you! I promise! And they show up in my writing as frustrations felt by the characters, which is why lines like that make appearances. :) The next chapter will appear just as normal this coming Sunday -- not too far off now, I promise!

Thank you for being such a dedicated reader and for such consistent reviews. ♥ Already eagerly awaiting your thoughts on the next update!

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