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Review:marauderfan says:
Is Scorpius in your fic the same age as Rose? I had assumed so, but then you mentioned he was Quidditch captain and it seemed unlikely to me that a third year would be captain. (Or that he would be muscular - Rose comments on that, so I guess he can't be a scrawny 13-year-old.)
I should mention that I have an awful memory and might have forgotten if you mentioned their ages. So it might not have been you being unclear about the ages - it could just be my scatterbrained-ness.

I was surprised that Rose so quickly came to the conclusion that Scorpius was involved in the Death Eater Jr's. I would have thought she'd give him more credit than that - and that she wouldn't automatically assume he's into something evil.

So, Owen's persistence to do things his way, and the remarks about him smiling widely make me think of him as like a younger, male version of Umbridge.

Harry and James's conversation at the dinner table had me laughing out loud.

Chloe saying "without your dorky little friend around"... Well. She's a winner isn't she. That's a great way to get people to like you and talk to you. [/sarcasm]

Interesting background about Chloe. But how do a bunch of kids think they're going to get Benjamin Arndale out of a prison that's thousands of miles away? (ok, that's rhetorical - I know it's going to be answered eventually. Sorry my feedback is kind of stream of consciousness as I'm sure you've noticed by now)
Great work on this chapter! And I'm almost caught up now :)

Author's Response: Actually, Rose and Scorpius are fourteen in this story. However, I seemed to have forgotten that in the sense that I've been writing them (Scorpius for the most part) as much older. Wow. Thanks for pointing that out! Maybe he's just a really really good Quidditch player? ;) They're supposed to be in their fourth year though. (It was never clear if Albus and Rose actually started in the same year. It just said Rose was going off with him as well, so I assumed she was about a year older).

Rose is constantly reminding herself that her father doesn't like the Malfoy family, and while she tried to give Scor a second chance, she can't help but feel that maybe she really has been betrayed. She's young and hurt from the library incident. Though, things will be looking up for her end hopefully here soon. :)

Oooh, Owen as a male young version of Umbridge? Wow! Haha! Well, while I actually don't like his character all that much (you'll see in a much later chapter) I would say he's not as evil ;).

I love writing the Harry scenes! He's such an awesome dad, yeah? :D

Ooh, good ol' Chloe. I actually quite like her. Despite the whole, you know, family background and all. xD

All shall be revealed soon! Thank you for reading and the feedback! :D I'm doing a happy dance right about now!


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