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Review:marauderfan says:
(whee, lots of reviews today! Sorry I didn't leave a review for the last chapter - I had written one and then accidentally refreshed the page and didn't feel like typing it all over again so I'll just make this one extra long.)

The animal treatment investigation sounds sort of fishy to me (no pun intended) - every 200 years is a little sparse if they were ACTUALLY trying to monitor magical creatures at Hogwarts. That said, I know there's no such thing and that it's just a cover for people investigating the mysterious occurrences at Hogwarts. There would be no need for the head of the Auror office to supervise how people react to Hippogriffs...

Also, there's a sentence where Jane asks something - who is Jane? Has she been mentioned before? Or am I a COMPLETE space cadet with short term memory loss? Either way, I have no idea who she is.

(ok, the end cleared that up - she's Dudley's daughter and a witch? Maybe she should have been mentioned earlier in the story, because I was really confused in the beginning there)

Also, Scorpius and Lorcan are there?!?!?! Those two are ones I always thought would be on the "good" side. Are they spying on Jackson's group? Were they bribed? Oo so intriguing.

Interesting that the Death Eater Jr's have named themselves the Angels. I'm interested to know what their goal is. Pureblood-ism? Just power for the sake of power?

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: I wanted to make it so they wouldn't remember hearing of such a thing. To make them think that maybe such a thing has just slipped their minds. (Their being the students). Harry was mainly there to see his kids and talk to them, and he had threatened to expel/arrest them.

Jane was mentioned in the very first chapter, in the very very end. Maybe I'll go back and add a character list to the first chapter or so.

Scorpius mentioned that they wanted him. (Or have you not got that far yet?) When they want you, they will get you. And trust me, they are very... convincing when the time comes you'll see. ;) Though, once they get a bit of their wanted members, they won't be so careless about including members of the Potter family.

Can't wait until you get farther along as well! :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! It always makes my day! :D

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