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Review:marauderfan says:
Haha, poor Albus, with all the girls after him. It puts me to mind of Romilda Vane, or Ginny circa Chamber of Secrets. (Snape had it wrong, clearly fame IS everything. Haha)

Chloe is quite confident for a first year, she seems to be leading seventh years (he is a seventh year, right?). It'll be interesting to see how this plotline develops.

Poor Rose. And stupid Malfoy. I guess that sort of stuff is bound to happen when you're thirteen though!

Also, I don't want to be nitpicky, but there's a part in the section from Albus's POV where you said he "really could care less" which - this is like my one huge pet peeve - should be "couldn't care less".

Author's Response: Oh Mia and Chloe. Don't worry too much. I'd like to think Al has a good head on his shoulders (when he gets to do his own thinking ;)).

Chloe is a first year, and Albus is a third year, and James is a Fifth year. Do I need to go back and do some editing? Or are you talking about Jackson? She's not a leader, Jackson is, but she has a specific background. Very important. :)

More Scorpius and Rose to come soon! ;)

Well, maybe he could care less ;). Alright, I'll go back and fix that up at some point. :)

Thanks for the read and review!

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