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Review:marauderfan says:
I understand your worries about not being good at poetry - but one of the nice things about poetry is that it doesn't have to rhyme, or have any meter, or anything. So if you felt that its song didn't follow proper poem form... don't worry. Maybe the Sorting Hat enjoys writing avant-garde poetry. After all, it has a whole year to write a song so it can do whatever it wants. Long story short, don't worry, it was good :)

I love the little quirks you add in that show the next generation's similarity to their parents. Like Hugo eating and talking at the table, there must have been 50 occasions when Ron did that too.

There was one thing that wasn't quite clear though. I'm assuming the freckled girl that was teasing Caleb in the beginning was Hayden Winters? I wasn't sure, because when she's sorted, it just says "A girl, who was no bigger than Lily", but if that's her, maybe identify her better. Unless it's a different girl entirely in which case ignore my suggestion.

Author's Response: Thanks about the poem! :) I have actually gone back and re-worked it since it was originally posted. :)

I love Hugo. I actually wish I wrote more with him because he is a lot of fun, so maybe I'll think of adding a bit of him in the future. :)

I'll be sure to correct that, or at least have a look at it. Hayden is in Ravenclaw, so if that girl was sorted into Slytherin, that was supposed to be Chloe. :) I'll check it out!

Thanks for the read and review!

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