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Review:Broken Butterfly says:
Hi there, its Broken Butterfly here with your review.
I'm so sorry for such the long turnaround time... finals and stuff.

I enjoyed this. It was written very well, and of course there was a lot of discription. I really think your plot is captivationg.
I like how you describe a side of FG that nobody else would think of. Why he became the monster he was. Why he really did the things he did. I think that the element you used with emotions in this chapter was superb. He was lonley and I think that it is fair for him to be so especially at the age he was when he was bitten. Then again with him not being afraid of anything until the very end. This was really good. I hope my review helps.
BB

Author's Response: Not a problem! I know how that can be.

I'm glad you liked all those elements of my story. It's definitely fun to get inside the heads of different characters!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)


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