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Review:Phoenix_Feather49 says:
WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT? I DON'T. WHAT IS THIS?

Why. Would. You. Do. This. I was right though, wasn't I? I SAID they would crash and burn. Oh you, I do love you and your heartbreaking story arcs.

Not McFarland! Oh Merlin, that was brilliant twist but horrible. I want to march into that room and pull Lily off him and give her a good talking to. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next- I'm guessing Jack won't be happy. Or will he see through it and realise she's just doing it to annoy him? Don't tell me! I want a surprise.

Another cracking chapter, so excited for the next one! Can't wait! You always keep me guessing, though I've got some predictions for how it'll end (I KNOW ALREADY)- probably in some heartfelt terrible way that will make me cry knowing you. Or you'll make me laugh.

Keep writing and update soon! Hope your exams went well. Mine certainly didn't :D

P.S Thanks for the piece of mind about Ellie's care. It actually really gave me some relief and I've changed my mind about a lot of it now. It meant a lot to hear that! Also, I'll never give up on this story. The beauty of it is that it is triggering and makes me think- that's why I love it so much. I promise if I did stop reading this, I'd always let you know and explain why.

Author's Response: AHH OKAY SO THERE'S SOME STUFF CALLED WRITING I DID AND NOW YOUR BRAIN SCRAMBLED A BIT IS.
Erm, because this was the first scene I thought of/wrote in the story and sparked the whole book...? :D Indeed, you did. Congratulations. I think it's safe to simply assume I will destroy your heart. :) Love you too.
YAY PLOT TWISTS. I'm not going to lie, McFarland did have a several more scenes that I cut out because I wanted it to be surprising but inevitable. Yup, me too. But it had to be him. Ooh, interesting guessing... a bit more than 'annoy', though, I think. She's on 'destruct' mode and doesn't realize that that mode only comes in 'self destruct' form.
Oh yeahhh, cracking so much I need cheese. (sorry, history revision is getting to me. Slowly losing my mind.) It's GONNA BE SO GOOD lol I'm gonna make it up as I go along YOLO. NO, post your predictions, I wanna know, please post them I wanna know please please please! :) (Let's be cautiously optimistic and hope for laughter?)
I pretty much have the other chapter sorted, so soon ish- check within the next five days certainly :P Oh, I completely messed up my first History and am already figuring out how to pay for the resit whilst English went better than expected! Oh no... I hope you're okay. :(
PS. you're absolutely welcome! It's not going to fit into the story arc, so I really don't mind. It's not like a spoiler or anything! Well, thank you for having so much faith in it, despite my continued torture of my characters and by extension, you. I hope I do it justice.



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