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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag!

Wow, I love the idea of your short story collection, of focusing on the post-war situation of some minor characters.

This chapter was very well-written and quite powerful. I liked the thought-process of the main character, of him thinking about his son, and not feeling remorse for his deeds at all. The way you expressed it all was very good and quite realistic.

Theere were a couple of typos here and there, like instead of then you write "the" etc., and the spacing was a bit too wide, but apart from that, this made for a smooth gripping read. I liked it.

Good work =)
9/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello! I'm glad you like the concept of this collection, it was really fun to imagine some minor characters and their struggles, and to imagine post-war life.

I'm glad you liked the main character's voice as well, and that he came across as believable. I really enjoyed writing him and trying to turn him into a dynamic character.

Thank you so much for the review! :)


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