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Review:Courtney Dark says:
This was yet another great chapter, I enjoyed it.

I am really starting to love Beth as a character. She seems very natural, very normal and I can't wait to read more! However, I found Peter's line about only a couple of them joining Remus during the full moon a little suspicious...

I liked that you brought up the Order of the Phoenix in this chapter - after all, there are only a few more years left until James and Lily's deaths (sob) so it will be very interesting to see how the war plays a part in all this.

Finally an interaction between Beth and Snape! I think you wrote their conversation very well - Snape definitely came off a little creepy, which I kinda think suits his obsessive tendencies. In fact, their conversation kind of made me wonder why it is Beth fancies him the first place...hmm.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and definitely adding this to my favourites!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're warming up to Beth like you are! In all the time I wrote about her (nearly two years -- I need a life!) I grew really attached to her, and so it's really neat to hear when readers enjoy reading about her, too.

The Order of the Phoenix will definitely become a larger plot point as things progress in the books! A huge one, I daresay.

Severus is someone I love even while seeing him as he truly is -- and that includes creepy! :) He's prejudiced and one-sided and arrogant, but he's also passionate and brilliant, and there are so many facets to him. I absolutely adore it. ♥ I could seriously write about him for years and never get bored.

Thank you for the favorites add, and for reading in general! ♥ I've very much enjoyed reading and responding to your reviews, and await more opinions from you with much anticipation!


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