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Review:potterfan310 says:
This is really, really good!!
It's also really original, I've never read a story like this before so go you!! :D

I think your characterisation of James is really nice and the fact he was married and is now a dad. It'll be interesting how him and Kay's relationship with each other will play out, especially if they become more than brother and sister in laws.

I really like your OC's Kay and her best friend Aura (Awesome name by the way!!). I love that she's bubbly and happy and I like that her and her sister were never that close because of the magic thing and before the magic thing (I mean look at Petunia and Lily, they were close before Lily found out she was a witch)

When James was on the phone to Kay and he was shouting all I could of was Ron when he rang Harry at the Dursleys, I dunno if it was intentional or not but aww, I love it when there are little things like that, that relate to the books :D

Michaela is adorable, aww. Babies are so cute, especially if James Sirius is their daddy!

This is a really good start and I really, really like it so far, I also thought it was a nice touch that the Weasley's were there to support James.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Definitely adding this to my favourites!!

12/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :D

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