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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello! I recognised your name as a fellow refugee from the closing CoS boards, and although I've never read your fics over there, I found this one here. Anyway, on with the review...
I like this so far. I like the way you've written Molly - its easy to see her resemblance to Percy because she acts a bit like him, only she's not nearly as annoying. Also, I like that she's the main character (or at least seems to be so far) because usually she and Lucy seem to be the next-generation Weasleys that everyone forgets about.
Victoire's choice in bridesmaid dresses made me laugh - the lace and olive green, she's clearly a Weasley (the way you described it reminded me of Ron's dress robes in GoF haha)
Also, drunk James sounds a lot like Hagrid.
Can't wait to see where you go with this! :)

Author's Response: Oh hi, marauderfan! Yes! I definitely recognize your name from the cos forums! :D I'm so happy you're here now (I hope you will be posting stories here too, no? :)) Thanks for coming over to read my story! :) It makes me really happy!

Alright, so Molly is a main character, though I should throw out the fact that (though I'm sure you've figured out by now) there are multiple POVs, but Albus and Molly are the two main ones I hope to focus on. I'm really glad that you caught on to her fashion sense being a Weasley thing! :D I've done my job well!

Oh boy, if James sounds like a drunk Hagrid now, I hate to think of what he sounded like before I decided to edit it and dial it down a bit!

Thanks for the review and the read! I hope you continue to enjoy it! I hope to see your stories on here as well!


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