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Review:Rilla the Reader says:
This is a fabby story! Squee! I love all your stories and read them sporadically and randomly and out of order. Oh well ;)
Lucy is my heroine and Scorpy is a doll. Seriously, if he was real I would kidnap him and keep him in my basement. Not to be Rose-like in any way of course.
Al is a mental health doctor?! Of course. He has Rose and Lucy for cousins, the doily loving duo of Percy and Audrey for an aunt and uncle, and Scorpius for a friend.
I only caught one typo in the whole thing, and that was because I thought it was an amusing one:
"All she did was turn up and wave her wand at our suitcase and, viola, in a short matter of days, wed managed to fit the contents of our entire flat into it"
I'm pretty sure that "viola" should be "voila" but knowing you, the word choice there could have some deep, existential, Brooding-Nameless-Barry-esque meaning that is unknown to an ignorant reader like myself.
Ciao and love muffins to you *squish*

Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much!

Yes! Al is loosely based on my own cousin, who recently qualified as a mental health nurse, so the job seemed fitting! I really wish I had more time to write about Albus' character and the job itself, but this story's probably long enough already...I'm rewriting it at the moment, so I'll see what I can do!

Baha, trust me to make a typo like that. Like I said, I'm in the process of rewriting (I'm about 3/4 through!), but even my edits aren't proofread right. I'll do another basic proofread after I've rewritten to catch all the silly mistakes like that. Thank you for pointing it out!

Anyhow. Thank you for the lovely review, and I hope you like the rest of this story, even if it is still half-finished! ♥


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