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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hey there! Long time no see; school is such a pain! :(

I really love this story! You write the Golden trio extremely well, it's hard to believe that she isn't in the books. I know she's mentioned once or twice, but as a plot hole, but I find it great that you've managed to fit her in!

I still hate Benjamin, he's a disgusting ghost/imaginary friend and I wish he died when they thought he did in the prequel. :(

The last line is extremely sweet! I actually "awh'ed" :p

I can't wait to see where this goes! If Benjamin will actually be defeated or not?! :D

Anyway, love this story and can't wait to see the next update! :)

10/10

Author's Response: Hi again! Ah, yeah, I hear you about school! At least you found a bit of spare time to check out the new chapter! (I really have to get better with my updates!)

Phew, I'm not messing up the Trio's characters! I know I can't use them every chapter because otherwise I would stray from canon, but their conversation with Sally-Anne *could* have happened. :) I mean, it doesn't have anything to do with the Prisoner of Azkaban (as far as any of these characters are concerned!).

I still like Benjamin, but that's because he's a pretty good villain. And if he died in the prequel, we wouldn't have Sally-Anne (yet Marta would still be around, so . . .).

You made me smile, remembering what that last line was. Yeah, it's sweet. Sally-Anne deserved that, considering what I'm going to do to her.

I just mentally reviewed where I want this story to go, and I can't wait to write it! Trust me, it'll be good!

Thank you so much for the review! It's definitely reassuring to know I'm still a good writer in something other than Marauders era! :)


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