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Review:AlexFan says:
I think one of my favourite parts while reading this was the part where Dom was talking about how Lily and Rose had flowers outside of their house. My mind was already thinking that it would be roses and lilies because of their names and then this grin just came on my face when it said that it was roses and lilies.

I know, it's such a small part but I liked it. Out of the two, Rose is definitely the conceited one, Lily was more friendly but Rose definitely had an arrogant air around her with the way that she acted and spoke.

I like following the dialogue, it flows really well and I definitely don't think that it's too much.

My favourite line was definitely "Albus Potter, modeling agent, generally attractive human wizard. Single. Duly noted."

Anyway, I think you did an awesome job on the chapter!

Author's Response: Hey there :)

Everyone seems to like the flowers! I thought it would be a cute touch and a way to convey how girly Rose and Lily are while poking fun at the seemingly self-absorbed nature of the modeling industry. I'm very pleased that it's gone over so well.

I'm happy you can already see the differences between Rose and Lily. I imagined their personalities working to their benefit because you could have two contrasting ideas in your photo shoots and appeal to different kinds of potential consumers.

It's also great to hear that you liked the dialogue and felt like it was well-balanced with the plot.

Thank you for this sweet review!

-Amanda


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