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Review:Maelody says:
OK, so I'm beginning to like Freya a little more, if that really was her writing back. She doesn't seem as mad at Louis like I thought she would be, and she said that she wants to make the decision with him. So, at least he is a part of the decision. I hope they get to see each other for the Easter Holidays without too many problems. It sort of sounds like her parents have her on lock down.

I like how you included the fact that she has to take a lot of potions to keep the baby healthy. I think a lot of people in their writing forget that a baby needs a lot of care and a lot of mothers end up having to take prenatal vitamins and such, so it's good to see that you've remembered this little fact! :)

Mummy Horatio, eh? I think it's cute! And honestly, if Freya doesn't end up being a part of the child's life, I would love to see Horatio standing at Louis' side and helping to take care of it. It would be like Three Men and A Baby, only, you know, with two boys lol.

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what's next! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you like Freya a little more, it was her writing back to him. Freya's not majorly mad at Louis, she just doesn't like being away from him and school.
Yep Louis is part of the decision. :D Her parents do have her on lockdown, they're very strict people.

I wanted to include them, as I knew, as you said, that some mothers do have to take vitamins during their pregnancy. I wanted to try and make this as beliveable as possible.

Yep Mummy Horatio, he wants to help Louis raise this baby! With Freya there or not, haha.

Thanks for the review!! I hope that you like the next chapter.


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