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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
First off, this was such a moving chapter. First paragraph had me in bits, I was so distraught, and you described it so well - a really moving first few paragraphs.
Plot development is awesome, as always, and I love how cool Astrid is and how awesome the characters get to be like children - good bit of characterisation there! A useful insight as well to each character.
I love how you've added nazis in (well not love obviously, but it made it more interesting and quite inventive too!)
Killer last line as well, has me totally excited and on the edge of my seat for next chapter! Eeeek!
The flashback added so much more tone to Johanna, and makes me lover her even more. I so want to meet Simon. Also, more Camille and Xavier action please!!
Did I mention how much I love french speech in this chapter? I do. It makes it totally original and even more awesome.
Another totally cool and engaging piece of writing! Well done Val! :D

Author's Response: I am the luckiest person on Earth to have you shower me with compliments twice in less than a week.

Astrid is one heck of a lady, that's for sure. She's essentially inspired from Fleur in GoF -- it runs in the family, I suppose!

The Nazis, obviously, are a huge part of the story. I wish they weren't there though...

Bah you are the first person to pick up on the final line, so thank you!

And of course there will be more flashbacks, and more Simon, and more Jo. And more French.

Thank you so much for your lovely review and your constant support Sophie, it means the world &hearts

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