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Review:Maelody says:
So many things I liked about this chapter! I loved the toothbrush bit! I'm one of the guilty ones who brushes their teeth before eating (I have no idea why seeing as I brush again afterwords) and the conversation just cracked me up! I also liked how they explained Horatio having no friends. This may sound sort of weird, but I sort of imagine Horatio as Patrick from the Perks of Being A Wallflower. I have no idea if he's actually gay or not, but he just reminds me of Ezra Miller and I loves him! :3

Molly and Lucy being twins? I've not heard of that, but I do like it a lot. I also like that you made Molly really nice instead of really obnoxious like a lot of other stories. It's just every little detail you add seems to add so much real life themes that it makes me smile. From the conversations to the descriptions in the rooms, and everything.

I'm glad that by the looks of it Freya has written him back. I do hope it's not her parents telling him to stop writing. He deserves to know what's going on!

Moving on! So far, this is one of my favorite chapters! :)

Author's Response: Yay!! Oh really? I can't brush my teeth before food, I always have to brush them afterwards. I'm glad that you liked the conversation. Haha Horatio has no time for other friends! Mainly because people don't want to be around him. :P
Really? Oh wow, I love that film (I actually haven't read the book yet. :P) so to have you compare Horatio to Patrick has made me so happy! Thank you so much!!

Yep they're twins, and I couldn't have Molly as obnoxious. I have always imagined her to be really sweet and friendly.
Awww you make me smile so much! I'm so glad that you love the little details a lot.

Yep Freya has written back to Louis, finally!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I'm so glad that this is your favourite chapter.

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