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Review:Remus says:
Hey Perelandra here with your review!

I'm so sorry that I've taken forever (and ever) to come and review this! Life has been crazy lately. New job, long hours...anyway, I'm sure you don't want to hear me complain. You want your review! XD

Just so you know, I'll be reviewing this as I read along. :)

First of all, your summary immediately intrigued me. I love Doctor Who/HP crossovers but to do it with Petunia...brilliant idea!

Man, Mr. and Mrs. Evans are quick to dismiss Petunia's comment. Makes me sad for her, really. She was just making a comment that she saw a police box and they're quick to dismiss her, telling her that it was a 'trick'. I can understand why she's mad. It would've made ME mad too!

before Lily could soar through the air and make flowers bloom in the palm of her hand, before she became a pretty thing herself. --Man, that last bit right there was like a knife to the heart. Without really saying it, you managed to show Petunia's jealousy of Lily's ability to do magic.

Yay! 11 to the rescue!

Oh my gosh! I could flail! Your Doctor sounds just like 11! Kudos to you for that! He's a hard character to pin down I think so I'm happy that you managed to do it.

Wow, thanks to your story I found out that Petunia got married at a very, VERY young age! 18-19.

Wait, what? no! It can't be over! What! You can't end it like this! XD Does the Doctor find her again? This isn't a very nice end for a one-shot! Does he try to look for Petunia, at least to apologize? He could at least go and make sure that she's happy. He doesn't take Lily and James, right? Because that wouldn't be fair to Petunia. He's Petunia's, not Lily's. Hahaha, as you can see, I'm devastated for Petunia's sake. XD I can't believe it but you managed to get me attached to her and worried about her feelings.

Love the Doctor's personality. It's so him.

Hahaha! This was a fantastic one-shot. Not very happy with the end because I want to know more! This was Petunia's story so it made me sad that it ended with Lily. :(

Anyway, I'll stop complaining now. XD

until next time

--Rosie

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