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Review:miluv says:
REVIEW TAG!

Okay. Here we goo-

So, first, ohmygosh, she has such a good voice! Its really strong and I already know a lot about her from it. She seems like exactly the kind of person I'd be friends with, except, you know, she probably wouldn't wanna be friends with me haha.

You have a great amount of humor in there, and your story is actually really relatable too. That bit about hipsters and mainstreamness had me nodding my head and everything!

The one thing is though, you might want to proofread a little more. I noticed a lot of punctuation missing and some grammar/spelling issues too. Not to worry, it doesn't make it unreadable, its just a little harder to comprehend, know what I mean? But everyone's a little busy, so I understand if you don't have enough time to check it over. Maybe you could consider a beta? If you are interested, I'd be more than happy to help out. PM me, or if not, there's a section on the forums that you could look into! Sometimes it helps to have another pair of eyes there to catch the few mistakes you might have;D

Overall, my favorite part so far is the fact that your main character is so strong. You really capture her essence, and the way you've written, its like she's calling up at me from the computer screen like READ ME NOW. RIGHT NOW. Haha:D

I really want to see where this goes, and I will definitely keep up with this story:) Great job and update soon!

xox, miluv

Author's Response: Thank you! I know about the spelling errors but it's getting to the point where there is always something I have to do and then I just end up saying 'meh' or the like and spending the whole night on the internet instead! I shall try and sort it out as soon as possible, thank you again.
Beth x


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