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Review:missclaire17 says:
I liked that you wrote the Invisibility Cloak is one of the family secrets that they actually keep because I feel like things like the Invisibility Cloak and the Marauders' Map aren't just something that people know willy-nilly.

Not sure if I approve of stealing it because, let's face it. It's the Invisibility Cloak. I can imagine the uproar that it would cause and if Liz was caught and how the Wotters might be REALLY mad that she stole it just so she can go spy on James to help Savannah, someone that James probably doesn't even know. Like, if I was one of the Wotters friends with Liz, I wouldn't like it.

But then again, I suppose that her spying on James is when she finds out the secret? lol

I like how Tobias and Liz pokes fun at Jensen; their entire dynamic makes everything so funny and it's rare that I can enjoy a scene with characters ALL OC.

Great chapter! (: Can't wait for your next update.

Author's Response: That's how I feel as well!! Those are important family heirlooms - you don't just go waving them around. Interesting opinion about the stealing of the cloak! We'll just have to wait and see if Liz gets caught/James finds out!! And I'm so glad you enjoyed the library scene. It's a bit nerve-racking writing so many OCs (and scenes with just them), so I'm glad you enjoyed it and didn't get confused/bored. Again, thanks so much for leaving such a nice and detailed review, and the next chapter will be up soon!!! Thanks xx

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