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Review:marauder5 says:
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This was absolutely adorable. I love that song, and though I've never thought about it before, it fits perfectly to Lily's situation!

This was thoroughly touching. Her incredible love for her little boy really did come across, and the sad fact that she would not be able to be there to watch him grow up, to love just as much as she wanted him to be loved, really broke my heart when I read this. And she thought that he'd always have at least Sirius, and Remus... but he didn't :( It's just too sad! But it was also very beautiful. JKR wrote so many times something like 'the ones that love us never truly leave us', and that's a theme that you've captured perfectly in this story! I think that a mother's greatest fear would be not being able to be there for her child and give him everything she wants him to have, and that's about to come true for her in just a couple of seconds.

This was beautifully written, very moving and very believable! I loved reading it, and it will probably stick with me for a while after this! Good job, and congratulation on finding the perfect song to add to make it even better!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!

I cried while writing it;') In my religious school (I'm hindu) we learnt about how a mother's love for her child is the only thing in this world that is as strong as God's love for us, and I wanted to capture that while writing this. I'm so glad you think I did that effectively!

And yes the song is AMAZING. I was shocked at how well it fit too lol;D

Thanks so much, you're too sweet!

xox miluv

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